Some suggestions, take it down in person and hand it to the guy doing the review.
Penske Truck Leasing FOR which i can...
Supervisory experience managing as many XX mechanics in a fast paced environment, sell this to suit the potential employer, do they need production of perfection or a combo of both?
What type of security clearance?
Trouble shoot what? Electrical, Engine? General mechanical stuff? using what types of equipment?
Familiar with what type of engine analyzer?
Rebuit what? A diesel or gas truck engine? Tune up on what? Prove you can work on Penske crap.
Secure a Yahoo or Hotmail email addy that is AWildman@... or AdamXWildman@... little more professional.
What exactly did you work on in the Navy?
Reduce font size allowing space for these additions, or reduce side margins and footers to create more space. 1 page is good, change paper color to grey? beige/tan?